My Fractured Fairy Tale - Puss in Boost

We were learning to write an interesting narrative starters for an audience  .We decided to write a fractured fairy tale.  First we learnt about the struclure of a narrative,  then we computer fairy tales.  After that we chase a fairy tales to change and make our story version of.I think that I'll done a good job of the story.  One thing I need to to work harder at doing more pixel art pictures.My next is to inprove my writing like more sentences.